Benefits To The Reader (The Actual Woman Reading Your
Profile)
Ask yourself what benefits the reader will get just by reading your profile. Go back to the earlier section which discusses what muscular women are seeking when they go online.
For example,let’s use the following two items:
• She wants a guy who is funny
• She wants a guy who can offer her an “escape” from the tedious routine of work, training in the gym, and cooking her food
Here is an example of how your first few paragraphs can read:
Hate it when you meet a guy in the gym who looks good, appears to have some intelligence, and doesn’t have a ring on his finger… but replies to your advances with the great line, “Let’s hang out tonight” or “Whatever you want to do, babe”?!?
Wow… how original! That guy must be a rip-roaring good time… Not!
Oh, and personally if I were a good-looking muscular woman I wouldn’t want to becalled
“Babe” either! I would want something much more unique and customized to me!
Guess what?!?
I will actually offer you something fun, unique, and worth your time. Yes, I will choose
something that is still “safe”… a single guy can never be too safety-conscious around online women ☺
The trade-off is that you have to hold my hand, tell me I’m not fat, buy me candles, and tell me that I have beautiful eyes. Oh, and you only can give me one kiss on the cheek goodnight. LOL!
And IF you’re nice, I might come up with an original nickname for you!
Or try this:
Sorry ladies, but I am not a “renovation” project. I know that you want a man who is like the BEFORE status on “Extreme Makeover: Home Edition,” but I actually can dress well, carry on a conversation, entertain your friends with amusing (yet appropriate) stories, AND make you laugh in public without being TOO risqué! What a terrible deal for you… LOL!!
Since I am not a renovation project, I guess we will simply have to laugh ourselves silly, make fun of people who believe that a piece of infomercial exercise equipment is the “magic elixir” to a hot body, and we will have to sneak in a cheat meal just to remind ourselves to be decadent every once in a while. Oh well, I guess a little “decadence” isn’t too bad a trade-off… ☺
This conveys a fun attitude, teases her about “role-reversal” (she has to buy you candles, etc.), and that you are going to be more fun than any guy she can meet in the gym. Play around with your wording until you get a few introductory sentences that sound like you (when read aloud) and are genuinely entertaining!
The goal is to be one of the few (if not the only) guys to whom she feels that she MUST reply!
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